Nice going on this one, the biggest thing is the hand holding the trident is a bit off. If you are having problems with a specific pose using yourself as a reference is a great idea, you can set a camera on a timer and get into the intended pose yourself. It really helps with alignment.
Other than that this is good improvement, keep up the good work!
Thanks! Yeah, that hand holding the trident was definitely the part of this image that gave me the most trouble. I drew and redrew it over and over again and eventually had to draw the bones first and then draw the skin over top of it. And somehow it still manages to look like the hand is on backwards if I stare at it too long. I tried using myself as a reference (I even kneeled down in that position), but I didn't have a picture. That is a really good idea. A picture probably would have made that hand tons easier to draw. I will have to remember that trick for next time.